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This week, we continue the repost of our playwriting Toolkit with the brilliant Zodwa Nyoni 

1. Theatrical imagery and metaphors explore and add vibrancy to storytelling.
2. They heighten an audience’s engagement and deepen the ideas conveyed in the play.
3. Imagery can be portrayed through the use of words and/or pictures. Imagery can contain metaphors, where the traits of one thing have been attributed to something else to emphasise a point.
4. In Activating an Image (https://www.writeaplay.co.uk/lyndsey-turner-activating-an-image/ ) Lyndsey Turner recalls a writer describing having woken up one morning with an image of a man on all fours barking like a dog. The writer went on to write a play exploring why the character was doing that.

As a writer you will have to ask yourself, Is this an image I want in the play? If I so, when and how do I show it? What does it mean? How will my choices affect the audiences’ understanding of the idea/themes/messages expressed in the play?

5. Imagery and metaphors do not have to be obvious to be effective. They can be subtle and repetitive. Overuse can diminish they’re effect, so you have to be clear on your intention.
6. Decide the rules and ways upon which the audience experience imagery and metaphors. They may offer a single meaning or multiple meanings throughout the play.
7. Metaphors can appear in various ways. They can be expressed through character/s, language, setting, events and the title of the play. In fact, the entire play can be a metaphor for a bigger concept.
8. By utilising theatrical devices, the writer can bring different perspectives to well-known topics, events, places and/or people.
9. Theatrical imagery and metaphors in use:

Ode to Leeds (Zodwa Nyoni) uses poetic language to explore the diverse experiences of young poets growing up in Leeds. In the opening performance, Darcy a 15-year old girl living in care states: “You were trying to find your way with a broken compass for a heart”. Emotionally she feels worthless at the start of the play. She uses slam poetry to examine her life to find direction and purpose.

ODE TO LEEDS – PROLOGUESCENE 1 EXTRACT

Ode to Leeds. Photo Credit Anthony Robling

Death and the King’s Horseman (Wole Soyinka) is a metaphor for the clash between European and African cultures and societies, as seen in the clash between Elesin and Pilkings.

The Mountaintop (Katori Hall) is about the last night of Martin Luther King’s life. The subject of the play is not obvious from the title. The title is taken from a speech he made earlier that evening, “because I have been to the mountaintop.” Through connecting to the character and his work, the importance of play is evoked as you read/watch it.

Hamilton (Lin-Manuel Miranda) references in the song ‘Hurricane’, the event of a hurricane destroying Hamilton’s home town. He writes about the destruction. The community is moved to raise money and send him to New York. It changes the trajectory of his life.  Later, the hurricane imagery has a metaphoric meaning, when Burr, Jefferson, and Madison use Hamilton’s affair to destroy his reputation. Hamilton feels like he is ‘in the eye of a hurricane’. He has to choose between his family and his political career.

10. Think about the senses when playing with imagery and metaphors. They aid us to process the world we live in. Let this principle aid the audience to process the world you are creating.

Exercises

1. As practise, use the image of a ‘man on all fours barking like a dog’ to inspire two new meanings of the image. Think about the questions the writer has to ask themselves, particularly paying attention to when and how? Play with locations and characters in the different scenarios.
2. Dialogue reveals character. Select one of your own characters. Look at their vocabulary in a scene. Are there lines where, by adding imagery and metaphors you can elevate their language and characterization? Their references can tell the audience much more about the character’s social/cultural background and emotional/psychological state. Repeat this for other characters.
3. A title can be striking and capture attention. It can allude to what they story is about or even provide mystery and intrigue. What is your idea? What is the message you aiming to express/interrogate? How can the strategic use of metaphors and imagery be evocative in your title? Come up with three potential titles.

Zodwa Nyoni is a writer based in Leeds. She won the Channel 4 Playwright’s Scheme in 2014 and was made Writer-in-Residence at the West Yorkshire Playhouse. She’s previously been: Apprentice Poet-in-Residence at Ilkely Literature Festival (2013), Leeds Kirkgate Market (2012), Poet-in-Residence at Writer-in-Residence at I Love West Leeds Festival (2010) and BBC Radio Leeds (2006),
She’s performed her poetry nationally and internationally at venues and events including: British Museum, Ilkely Literature Festival, Bridlington Literature Festival, Venezuelan Embassy, Latitude Festival, Southbank Centre, eKhaya Multi Arts Center (Durban), Nuyorican Poets Café (New York, USA) and Historic Hampton House (Miami, USA). Her poetry is featured in the Suitcase Book of Love Poems, Sable Lit Magazine, The Warehouse Magazine (Canada) and Aesthetica Magazine’s Creative Works Annual 2009.
Her theatre credits include : Of Home and Each Other ( 2018,Splash&Ripple/University of West England), Ode to Leeds (2017, Leeds Playhouse), Borderline (2017, Young Vic), Weathered Estates (2017, University of Hull/ Hull City of Culture), Boi Boi is Dead (2015, Tiata Fahodzi, Leeds Playhouse & Watford Palace Theatre), Nine Lives ( 2014, Oron Mor/Leeds Playhouse), Home Has Died (2012, Lift Off Festival ) ; and The Povo Die Till Freedom Comes (2010, Freedom Studios). Her plays are published with Bloomsbury.
Her radio credits include: Love Again (2016, BBC Radio 3). Zodwa recently made her first short film, ‘Mahogany’ (2018) commissioned by the National Trust and 24 Design Ltd. It tells the perilous journey of slaves and mahogany from the Caribbean to stately homes in England.
She is currently commissioned at Kiln Theatre and Manchester Royal Exchange Theatre.

If you’d like some more exercises on imagery and metaphor the 2017 livestream workshop with playwright and Bruntwood Prize winner Phil Porter and a blog by director Lyndsey Turner on activating an image